“I would rather remain single all my life
rather than marrying in such a treacherous family like yours!” Aditya’s parting
words had killed Sumitra’s soul. She woke up every night remembering them;
terrified by their callousness. “I believed you when you said your father had
not stolen the money in his factory. I believed you, didn’t I? And now he has
the tenacity to cheat my father with this fake money. You know I would have
married you even if you had told me that you could not give the dowry my dad
asked for. You broke my heart Sumitra! I loved you so much.” Aditya had tears
in eyes while Sumitra had tears in her heart.
How could he be so vicious? The tormenting image of Aditya leaving her
minutes before their marriage slowly gave way to the more devastating visual of
her father sitting lifeless in the middle of the house. “My little girl… I want
to ask you only one thing. You believe your father, right?” He asked with
imploring eyes which rained tears seeing his daughter nod vigorously and
collapse on his lap. He whispered softly in her ears: “That’s all this old man
wanted to hear my child! That’s all!” That was his last whisper.
The four men were talking in low voices.
Raghav went a little closer and positioned himself behind a banyan tree. The
man who was speaking animatedly was the man who Raghav had trusted the most.
“Kishorilal sahib.. It was a master stroke to have the currency serial numbers
included in the house pledge agreement. Poor Ramcharan didn’t even know such a
thing existed when he signed the papers. You easily matched those to what you
had withdrawn from the bank that morning and we did the rest to frame him for
giving us fake money as dowry!” Aditya was bragging away. “Actually Ambarish
uncle set it up nicely.. What an act it was! Getting his own money robbed and
framing it on Ramcharan just days before the marriage. And then we could play
the fake dowry money drama to completely crush him. It was all too easy!” Raghav
wanted to strangle him right away. But he stopped himself. He was not ready.
Ambarish who was silent all this while spoke
slowly and frigidly. “You just had to break the man.. And then he killed
himself. I was really annoyed when your father decided to get you married to
that Sumitra. I only got my element back when you explained me your master
plan. I must say... I couldn’t have asked for a better son-in-law. I have had
my eyes on that palatial house of Ramcharan for a long long time. That is
certainly worth a killing. Now we get that free of cost and I get to keep his
gratuity and pension as a souvenir!” Aditya
interjected. “Let us not forget how important a role my dear friend Ajeesh has
played here. And not to forget his sexy but lethal car! Honestly, I liked
Sumitra. I feel a little sad for her.” They all burst into laughter. Kishorilal
was still perturbed. “We still have that
problem with the house. You can’t just take it!” Aditya dismissed that
nonchalantly. “That I am going to take care of without beating a sweat, Sir!”
His wicked smile brought solace to the others.
Raghav could not bear to hear a word more as
his blood was at its boiling point. He returned home to see Sumitra sitting
lifeless in the middle of the house. Just like father. He caressed her head,
she turned away. He held her hand gently. He couldn’t feel her pulse, but her
pain flowed through him. She couldn’t feel his touch but the glitter in his
eyes meant that the wait was over. Finally the echoes that pound her ears would
soon stop. “They are here. I saw them. After three months, they have come out from
hiding. They feel fear no more. The time has come. We have waited long enough.”
His eyes were spitting fire. That moment they heard the door open!
The air inside the house was filled up with lethal
venom as familiar evil made its way in. “Ahh.. here we are! Take a look at our
catch. The trophy for our master plan! It was easier than I expected. I didn’t
really think that we could get rid of that Raghav so easily. We didn’t have to
do anything. The guy killed himself. What a shame!” Aditya sounded a little disappointed.
“You haven’t felt too much pain boy, have
you? When the only two people you ever cared for in your life are no more, you
easily tend to question the reason for your existence. And don’t forget, he had
the impossible task of paying up for both the money his father had borrowed
from Kishorilal and also the money that was purportedly stolen from my
factory!” Ambarish was methodically stone cold in his inference.
Aditya’s best friend Ajeesh made his
presence felt. “That is why it was so important to make it look like Sumitra
had also killed herself. If Raghav had known that we had planned that, he would
have certainly come after us for vengeance. You all should thank me for
volunteering to do your dirty work.”
“Don’t get too arrogant boy. You were not
supposed to come to this village again. You were the perfect stranger under whose
car a dejected Sumitra willingly ended her life. Your act is over, remember. If
anyone sees you with us, then we could be in trouble. And by the way, you
didn’t do it for charity, son!” Kishorilal was fuming.
Aditya patted Kishorilal on the back.
“Relax! no one can do anything now. It is now time for the final act. I am
going to make people believe that I am still so smitten by Sumitra’s love and
that I can’t live without her. I buy this house from Kishorilalji and I spend a
year mourning Sumitra’s death. That much time is enough for people to forget
about wars. Then Ambarish uncle will persuade me to marry his daughter and I will
reluctantly give in with a heavy heart. And then the bride and groom will live happily
ever after! In this very house! Kishorilalji gets Ramcharan’s gratuity while
Ajeesh gets the stolen factory money. How about that for a plan? Sounds fair,
isn’t it!”
Thunderous claps applauded his deviously
ingenious plan. A ghastly silence ensued as they looked at each other totally
befuddled. Raghav and Sumitra had just welcomed their prey. An unknown fear
gripped them. Aditya broke the silence. “Oh.. Come on.. That’s just the wind
beating against the windows. What is with you guys? Has the dark night gotten
to your nerves? Now don’t tell me that Sumitra’s spirit is waiting inside to
haunt me. I wouldn’t mind a little bit of romance anyways!” His evil laugh
echoed back from the walls in Ramcharan’s voice. An eerie chill engulfed the
souls of the sinners!
“Bhaiyya… you can take care of the others..
but this one is mine! A few months ago, in this very house, he had promised me that
very soon he is going to entrust me with his life. Now I am just going to take
what is already mine. Nothing much has changed, has it?” Sumitra winked at
Raghav who saw the rare twinkle in his sister’s eyes. “Sure my dear.. give him
all the romance he is yearning for!”
After 2 hours of drinking and some heavy
duty gambling, the three of them bid good bye and good luck to Aditya who was
completely sloshed. He went straight to the bed. He heard the door bolt behind
him!
- A SHORT STORY BY RAJ
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