Read Part I and II here:
http://mindfiction.blogspot.com/2011/11/dhannobari-tale-of-2-villages-part-ii.html“What happened to Dhanno?”, Moushumi immediately regretted asking the question.
There
was a long silence and a deep suffering inside Kamesh. “She was waiting for me at
the same island you were abandoned in. Only that I couldn’t come in time! The
tiger was early that day!” There was no evidence of pain in the way he said it
but she could hear an invisible cry of anguish!
“That
island was supposed to be the starting point of our journey together into a new
and unknown world. A journey neither of us were proud of undertaking! I guess till
that point I had a simplistic view of life. I believed I had the mind of a
reformist. I thought it was my job to lead the villagers towards a superior
life and I was sure I had it all figured out. But my father’s death made me
realize that I didn’t have the heart of a revolutionary. I realized that it
takes more sacrifices than ideas to change the lives of others. Suffering and
pain consumed me with just one single blow. The radical inside me was killed by
the frail egotist that was left of me! I decided that I will take Dhanno far
away from this God forsaken village and lead a happy yet ordinary life.
You
know when do you feel the greatest pain? When you realize how weak you actually
are! That is when you see yourself truly naked for the first time. I felt like
a shameless selfish coward who was to turn his back on his people and run for
his life. But at least I had Dhanno. So I thought! Kalimaa had other ideas.
Partha, a 4 year old boy was to be sacrificed at the northern shores of the river
that night! I had to save him but my only option was to get him out of the
village! To where: I didn’t know. With the help of my village comrades, I was
able to escape with the boy and rowed frantically towards the island where
Dhanno was alone, waiting for me since morning! I was able to battle the deadly
storm that night but was unable to battle the fate which didn’t even spare her
body for my eyes! I searched the entire island for 2 days only to find a blood
strained piece of her sari. That changed my life forever! Once again!
The
villagers believed that Kalimaa had taken Partha. I have been reinstating their
faith every year since then!” Moushumi looked at Kusum and tears started
gushing from her eyes!
Moushumi
was so engrossed in his riveting tale that she had forgotten her surroundings.
She had failed to see that she was no more surrounded by the vastness of the
river. And when she realized her premises, it took a long while for her to
absorb the sheer enormity of its beauty and the silent poetry in its
connotation. She was not looking at a vast stretch of land with fields fresh
with crops and houses rich with people. She saw a dream visualized by minds,
transmitted by words and realized by hands. She did not see men working, women
caring and teaching and children playing and learning. She saw a society that
had formed right with the people’s intent as the clay shaped by the wheel of
their ideals. She saw men and women and children living and enjoying life as it
should be. She was standing in a village built by man at the shores of a river
made by God!
“Welcome
to Dhannobari”, Kamesh’s smile had a sense of pride and air of humility. “The
village that made me, dedicated to the woman who loved me!”
Moushumi
noted his words carefully: “The village that made me” not “The village I made!”
“Dhanno’s
loss completely shattered me. I felt there was nothing left in my life. But
then when you reach that zenith of pain and loss, fear ceases to exist, the fog
clouding your thoughts separates and you clearly see that one reason for your
existence; that one performance your life is destined to enact! I saw the first
and original purpose of my life as a flickering flame still alive and battling
my inner fears all this while. That was the only thing left in me and I had a
lifetime of me to consume for its cause!
Along
with a few of my converts from the village and Partha, I set out into this river
in search of something that I had no idea of but was somehow sure would change
lives forever. After a week of wandering, we landed on the shores of what you
see now has transformed into that magnificent dream of a village. This place
was barren and deserted, rich with land, fed by the river! It was exactly what
I needed. We had the elements of nature that could not be corrupted. We could
make this place from scratch. It was to be a place where man and nature were to
live in harmony: No one had to sacrifice for the other. We opened our doors to the
willing and the righteous. Everyone who was willing to work was welcome in
Dhannobari: without their divisions, differences, class, caste or creed.
Everyone would have to live and work together!
And
they came. They came from the neighboring villages across the other side of
Champak forest. They came by foot, by boat, in dinghies, as a family, alone or
in groups. They trickled in from Vithrapur: the converts. The silent revolution
was still on, gaining strength by the day. Dhannobari became a society run by
cooperatives where no one would exploit the other and everyone had a share of
the land. And what transpired after that is for you to see. Dhannobari is for
every person who has hope, who believes in himself, who works hard and who
loves all. It is a refuge for every single soul that faces the threat of a sacrifice
to evil superstitions or social distinctions. The revolution is far from over
and it will never be!”
Moushumi
saw the fire in his eyes and the desire in his heart and felt certain that they
will never be extinguished! She looked at a thin discolored wire that ran along
the wall of the school building. A huge generator was lying on the side without
any connections (yet)! “Electricity!”, she gasped! She stood engulfed as the
village unfolded in front of her. It stood tall as a symbol of faith. It was
every dreamer’s dream. It was a sight that froze in her memory. Then she looked
at her notebook. She smiled and threw it away.
“Not
writing your story any more”, Kamesh winked.
“Guess
I will have to start over again!”, Moushumi winked back at him.
24th August
1975: “No
one comes into this world to be “the ordinary”. Every man in this world is an
idealist at some point in his life. Every woman is a dreamer once. We all begin
by following our heart only to get lost along the way. No one can be blamed and
no one will be spared. Life will break
every single one of us. But only a few will truly realize what that means. Only
a few will be able to see beyond the personal havoc and destruction caused by
our ideals and realize their potential to construct life.
Dhanno’s
loss wrecked Kamesh. But it was her loss that prevented him from going back to
being ordinary. That loss and its pain showed him his destiny, reignited his
flame and spread it like a wild fire. It is the torch that guides his people
every night through every storm and it is the fuel that feeds their desire to
live and create. Dhannobari is a pardox that couldn’t have been created without
Dhanno but wouldn’t have existed with her!”
She
put the book down. The writer’s last words struck a strange resonance
with a thought of hers that once shaped her current reality! There were no tears
in her eyes but a silent prayer parted her lips. She was sad that she could not
be with the man she loved so much. But she was happy that he was still the man
she loved. She could bear the pain of not being with him but she could not
stand his agony of not being him. Dhanno had the heart of a revolutionary!
- A Story by Raj.
- A Story by Raj.
Moving and perceptive. Liked it very much.
ReplyDeletetouching. took the reader along
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Thank you Sunil. Glad you liked it. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sujatha. :)
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ReplyDeletewell done, i think i have to read 1 & 2 to fully get the story.
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Thank you so much Little Princess. :) Am so glad you liked it.
DeleteYou know when do you feel the greatest pain? When you realize how weak you actually are!
ReplyDeleteNice cute little story....:)
Thank you so much Latha. Am so happy you liked the story. :) Very true.. Our weakness makes us feel very vulnerable.
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ReplyDeleteVery good story unfolded in a vivid manner .. Liked the twist at the end ..
ReplyDeleteReminded me of Ayn Rand's Atlas Shrugged :)
You like complex plots eh?