Bob
first saw Nicole in Gold Coast, Queensland .
She was there shooting for the new Foster’s beer commercial. It was her first
time in Australia
and she was lost in its vastness and splendor. Sea World is a fun place to
be even if you are working. Big Bob was quite famous at the waterfront there
and he earned his living by entertaining passers-by with his antics, fun tricks
and occasionally his songs. Songs were not really his forte and neither he nor
his fans understood what he sang but they loved him nevertheless.
But
for the first time, his song not only made no sense, it was out of rhythm too.
It was because his heart was beating in frantic resonance at every glimpse of Nicole
who just wasn’t taking her eyes off of the evening sun that seemed to be busy in a round
table conference at horizon with the sky and the ocean. Bob sulked at the
sudden appearance of an adversary and ended his performance abruptly much to
the chagrin of his devout audience. Some understanding folks wished him luck
while others cracked a silly joke at this odd love story that was unfolding.
She
was a star who would soon be seen on television all over the world. He was just
an amateur artist who probably wouldn’t even make it to the local newspaper. But
all that didn’t matter one little bit. To Bob, it was love at first sight. For
the next 10 days, he watched her with pining eyes and with every passing day
fell more and more in love with her. His performances grew more erratic and
less frequent. Even his most ardent visitors were getting frustrated and he would
appease them once in a while with an inspired but rapid fire performance. He then went back
to watching her.
She
noticed him too. She watched him charm his audience. She watched him watch her.
Somewhere in between, even though just for a split second, their eyes did meet.
But then day 11 came and it was time for Nicole to leave! Her cruise was ready
but she wasn’t. Bob had grown so used to her eyes that he decided that he would
follow her to any corner of the world, not to win her heart, not to propose his love for her, not to live happily ever after with her, but to just keep
looking at those mesmerizing eyes forever. And God granted his wish: literally!
Life
provides many excruciating moments but there cannot be a moment more death-like
than to helplessly watch your love die in front of your eyes. Nicole’s agony was more painful than Bob’s
death. That was the moment when their eyes met again! But this time forever! It
was the memory Bob died with and Nicole had to live for!
On
one mid-summer morning, Tursiops Truncatus also known as Bottlenose dolphin and
fondly known as Bottlenose Bob fell in love with
Pygoscelis Adeliae also
known as brush-tailed penguin and never after known as Nicole, in a glistening
water front in Australia in the presence of the sun, sea and sky. And 24 days later and 4357
miles away, in a deserted coast of Antarctica, Bob’s love for Nicole was
immortalized as Bob transcended into a new world. Bob swam ferociously all the
way to Antarctica following the expedition
cruise that took Nicole back home. The journey didn’t kill him but the cold did!
And death fulfilled his last wish. He died looking into those mesmerizing eyes
of Nicole!
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A SHORT STORY BY RAJ
"sun that seemed to be busy in a round table conference at horizon" so beautiful! I could just visualize it that way!! And what an endearing love story!!
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DeleteBeautiful.... extremely... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Pranita. :) Am glad you liked the story. :)
DeleteBeautifully written...
ReplyDeleteQuite touching story.... :)
Thank you so much Vinay. Am so happy you liked it. :)
DeleteWow! That was one kind of a masterpiece. :) So very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jen for the lovely compliment. :)
DeleteTill half the way, I thought its going to be another love story, but the twist was so amazing that re-read the story twice. Loved it so much... :)
ReplyDeleteOhh.. thank you so much for the lovely compliment. Am so glad you liked the story. :)
DeletePainful and that's why I feel my poem 'adhoore daastaan' is true. No true love story is ever complete. I mean, no happy ever after in those...
ReplyDeleteI am bored of saying that you are a great writer. Lemme think of a new phrase, especially coined for you...:)
yeah Saru. So true. Your poem "adhoore daastaan" is a true masterpiece. The beauty of a love story is that it is never perfect or complete.
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It's so difficult to coin a phrase for a writer of your caliber...I'm still working on that:)
Delete:) This is the best compliment I can get. You truly made my day. :)
Deletebeautiful!
ReplyDeleteis this why they say, "be careful what you wish for because God might just give you what you wanted"
Thank you so much Sujatha. :) And beautifully said. :)
DeleteAnother astounding twist- it did make me reread it with fresh eyes!! AMAZING!!! You have such a knack when it comes to writing these short stories. EXCELLENT!
ReplyDelete:) Thank you so much for those lovely compliments. You truly made my day. :)
DeleteBeautifully written! Keep them coming!
ReplyDeleteThank you soooo much Krupaa. :)
Delete@ Vatinam+
ReplyDeleteWish you a good day and full of joy...
Thank you so much.
Deleteso beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you very much and welcome here.
DeleteI quite laughed when it started off with "Gold Coast". Hardly anyone writes about the southern hemisphere anymore- I suppose I felt more loyal towards it and continued reading.
ReplyDeleteOh and, brilliant! =)
A very warm welcome to you. :) I am glad I wrote about the Southern hemisphere and I am glad you read it. :) Thank you very much for the warm compliment and I am so happy you liked the story.
DeleteBeautiful story ! The twist was very nice, making it more beautiful..
ReplyDeleteA very warm welcome to you Abhinav. Thank you very much and I am so happy you liked the story. :)
DeleteGod it's so beautifully written. classic. Thank you so much for commenting on my blog, otherwise I would have missed this... Adding your blog to my must-read list :))
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work...
Oh my god.. that is such a lovely compliment. I am truly humbled. :) A very warm welcome to you here. Am soo happy you visited and that you liked the story. :) Really means a lot.
Deleteawesome as always :)
ReplyDeleterocking one raj !
Thank you so much Deepak for the wonderful compliment. :)
Deletenice read!!!
ReplyDeleteA very welcome to you here. :) And thank you very much. Glad you liked it.
DeleteLoved your writing as always Raj. Very touching and beautiful yet tragic story.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Akshay for the wonderful compliment. Am so happy you liked the story. :)
Deletea really beautiful story..... lovely...
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much Santosh. Am glad you liked it. :)
Deleteawesome read...keep them coming Raj...following you from now on !
ReplyDeletebtw, you've been tagged:
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Thank you so much Rahul. Am very happy you liked the story. Thank you very much for following and for the tag. :)
DeleteDont want to say too many words as one is enough to aptly describe as everyone said - Beautiful!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jaish for the beautiful compliment. :) Means a lot.
DeleteWhen I reached the part Tursiops Truncatus, I wondered what happened to such a lovely story. The scientific name made me think it might get boring from here... But what a lovely twist.... I am glad I continued reading. Looking forward to more such pieces on your blog!
ReplyDeleteWelcome here Anuradha. I am very glad you too that you continued reading. :) Thank you so much and am so happy you liked it. I hope I continue writing to your expectations. :)
DeleteSo so touching! :) This is the 1st post of yours that I am reading. Loved it! :)
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A very warm welcome to you Archana. Thank you so much for the lovely compliment. I am so happy you liked the story. And thanks for following too! :)
DeleteI am here for the first time and I started out anticipating a typical hand in hand, you in my eyes romantic story but your last paragraph said it all. It did string a chord in my hearty rhythm.
ReplyDeleteWell written and presented me with a soulful experience
Best
Katie
A very warm welcome to you here Katie. :) I am so happy you found the story different and that it gave you a nice feeling and experience. Thank you so much for the lovely compliment. :)
DeleteWow.. thank you so much Ashwini. I am so glad you liked my writing style. That is such a lovely compliment and it really made my day. :)
ReplyDeletePainful story. Great narration style!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ramakant and welcome here. I am so glad you liked it and the narration style. Thanks once again. :)
DeleteNice to read your little story.. your words talk beyond literal meanings.. wish you all the best..
ReplyDeleteA very warm welcome to you here Dipa. And thank you for those lovely words. :) I am so glad you liked the story.
Deleteaww...just read your article about dolphins and then this..looks like I would never be able to look at any dolphin show all my life..I think, it's time I follow you ..:)
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DeleteThank you so much Latha for following. :) I was heart broken to know the plight about dolphins and that too after writing this story. :(
DeleteInstant ever-lasting love! Isn't that what we all want?
ReplyDeleteAHHHHHHHHHHH che why kill animals that too a cute bob!!!I am in tears here! no nono nononoooooooo change the ending!
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